WALT: write 110 words in ten minutes
For this task, I needed to write 110 words in ten minutes with any topic. My favorite part while writing this was using paragraphs to make my writing look neater. Maybe next time I could add more detail to the story
He found himself sweating while hearing the faint footsteps racing towards him. He got out of his bed making his way to the kitchen. After he had eaten his breakfast he got changed and started his day off.
He was just feeding his dogs until a white Rollsroyce came into his driveway. One man came out wearing a black tuxedo and plain black glasses. He came towards the old man. He then said to him ¨Excuse me sir this is the FBI, I’m gonna need you to come with me¨ So the old man listened and went into the car.
They kept driving down a road until they went into a building that looked like it had been abandoned for a very long time. They walked inside going down all the steps until they reached the bottom floor. The old man then asked ¨umm excuse where are we?¨ But all he replied with was ¨home¨...
Kia ora Ngairon,
ReplyDeleteMy favourite part is your last line because it hooked me and made me wonder about what would happen to the old man next. When I read your post I learnt that you are good at writing stories that keep you guessing and wondering what will happen next? Maybe look back and re-craft your writing to make sure it uses punctuation consistently and makes sense all the way to the end. Keep up the great work Ngairon! Ms Peters